Hypnotized fingers pull away from the
Nursing of the glass hands to the clouds pull off the hypnotized sky
Hypnotized hand drawing of the glass sky
Let the sun paint the intersection Sun red
Let's paint the red sun
spread through the foliage Serpent's Egg and diamond nail
and leaves spread over the
White paper snake leaves its spread over diamond fingernails
the glass sphinx returns its sibling's kiss
Return to kiss his Abu Glass fear returned to his brother's kiss Sphinx
the ghost of you appears in my nights
You will be shown the ghost is my night
You have displayed a demon in my night
You will be displayed at night my ghost
You will be shown the night my ghost
My demons will appear in your night
and my mouth veiled stab wounds Solitude and mouth wounds Killer Solitude
and my mouth stings killer
veiled Solitude and killer stings in my mouth
Mimetized bleak environment in underlit dim
we are slowly returning to the waters
ever backwards we fall in slow waters and It is up to us to fall back
Scream like sinewaves from escaping chuckled Illusions from
a screaming chuckled specter screamed the same attention to Cry like sinewaves
4 comments:
very Lamantiaesque, Lazare!
that's a compliment, i guess... i know nothing about Lamantia, haven't read him, but i'll look it up... sure it's a good thing.
i thank you for your support, Rob.
i thought this one was a bit of a piece of crap, really, though i spent some time editing those sentences...
the thing is, the page on discharge is too narrow and i couldn't get it typographycally right when publishing either. i thought there was maybe a rhythm, an intonation to get the phrasing "right" when read, but it's too broken... i don't think it's working quite well.
i was planning to delete it, but i'll keep it here for you.
all the love to you.
the imagery is incredible
as for the rhythm, well, i thought it was fractured and.........borpity
perhaps the lay-out actually contributed to what i thought was your intent...laffs!!
v. creative
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